【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 ]1 B8 r, a2 P5 sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! }/ ^' P. [" MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 z" }+ _) `7 j% iI would probably know how you feel
; Z8 D( C% z! j  {# qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 @9 \4 D* c$ FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 U  A% A/ x: v  d& f! s  Y0 VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) {7 y* j6 k- D! H  {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 }$ M- D/ e6 }  i8 yLove… just the word love
% e( r; u; Z" w- W" f) G; QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; {# q* ?3 s) H8 IIf today isn’t too late,
; h6 ^- B7 Q2 w7 S0 j$ nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* J9 X% M2 z* e& iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! g) F4 M! X5 P* _Can I entrust it to you?
% d4 \5 [6 P' ?% x6 Y1 h5 P6 t; GEntrust my love within your heart
$ ?8 f: z4 u5 l4 uCan I entrust it to you?
3 ?$ Q) u3 z6 X9 Q$ q% X! m( mEntrust my love within your heart

, N/ q# K2 Q/ q3 k+ ][ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 v; a) s% q( }) ^  I1 A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) V, z, f0 K. q  [9 r3 g<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) ]+ n" s+ t- d) W$ M0 k& E: A$ o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 R" R' s" ~. R: V3 R+ v+ Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ }% {: y" Y2 B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) x/ i6 P6 Y% \3 m! a( h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* J! }; o" d$ \8 \; K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 }1 V# D  b# e4 X+ N$ ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 t- n. F% N) H9 H; e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, c( B, C) j; G  A* G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ A* T$ A8 e+ ~0 {1 j  G" g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; R; X2 q% `* }3 Z4 I7 j. k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. W! ?; e! @: b9 G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. n' x1 s6 O% D( h$ f, C' X" v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- f; {1 ^# y9 `& @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" G, c9 q4 n  k$ e2 U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; Y7 p4 ~- u7 m' K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ `7 d) w4 ~: X% X$ r' H9 }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. _. R. [0 `/ C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" O/ g  b& n4 l3 \0 N; S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; b/ z; }3 J0 ^' y( k) c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ j: ^, @' d1 ^9 I. m7 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 U. K. n& P- p9 r4 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 G0 n7 ^! V; s+ k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 \% M, J/ ~8 D6 t  o 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( U0 |# F/ M9 y) w2 N+ J! p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>