【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. u! k+ g" b0 }1 ]我另将歌词附在此。
; `  S# J/ c" ]& dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 r( h/ Y$ G  Y5 E5 WBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 G& V/ f/ z& W, k6 k% OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ i/ ~) H: S& L7 ~. }% N* Y  _If today isn’t too late,
! i) C6 [! A$ EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% p9 ~- Q) ]; x% iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% }: l! w) T8 _: T/ ^/ TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, W" V& V: a" D0 ]! b' \1 ?' II want to confess that I love you,
9 c( G6 r+ ?. U" O( h/ WBut I never did
* r& a! m+ T9 ~% lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- F0 ?' Z4 ]) m6 ECan I entrust it to you?
0 ^5 V8 D' f( G: Y$ h; r+ {) b; tEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  p; I% \) ~6 Q4 U1 l, n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& N: L  C( g1 ?: `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 u$ e% r$ W8 z2 C- F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 I# a( c1 _% S" g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 K$ K  k  O6 z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) l9 d$ l* n7 \0 j: R5 E4 c: m! o# I<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 i( p. j" K: @4 Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. Y# I& [) Y# u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 ~' @8 w6 T6 }, n1 z3 n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# X& [& F8 Z, L# j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 {% X8 ]; m, O; j+ r) Z  L" d9 t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: Y" `/ q" M  |" @- E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 y4 a* b, _7 F  r9 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! w9 [' C8 ~: H6 u5 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- k* q- b% G8 ]5 Q+ z% U9 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! N; t4 X/ ~6 `/ V6 A* C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: q, h; G4 ^! h8 i+ t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) e+ f4 y& S  q8 O% ?; e% U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 m* X5 O9 O: @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 h3 o* A: W, ?9 L<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 v  q6 R% `8 R) e* {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, ~$ o* K0 {; i  U0 a# M3 F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% L- n+ e* f, E9 d. O  s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 Z, n) e- c0 t  w5 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 H7 O, H/ F# z* p. `( m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ R# g8 ~8 T; r: c: x7 R0 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ c" i6 M4 V0 @$ i5 C) z; U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 x; ]$ N- d: u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 ?; \0 e& }1 f+ _" _ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( q# {$ L9 A7 N+ d) E: n1 Y( M这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& _% {! l0 h; z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 X0 m3 X' J; j6 }- ^9 |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>